What do you think of this poem...........plz be honest and analyze if you wish??

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What do you think of this poem...........plz be honest and analyze if you wish???

The Beach at Sunset.

-There it was the beach at sunset
Another encounter was about to happen
There it was;a Giant Gold Ball
Sinking in to the serene and silent sea
There it was a clsh of the titans
It is almost like the sean wins
But the giant comes back again
Several hours later,set for another enconter-

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