Can you please read and review some of the stuff I have written?

Question:

Can you please read and review some of the stuff I have written?

I have posted all of my writings on http://www.freewebs.com/simplyme13/...

Please check them out and tell me what you think. Honestly. Thanks.

Additional Details

3 weeks ago
http://www.freewebs.com/simplyme13/index...

Sorry about the messed up link. Let me know if this works. Thanks.

3 weeks ago
If the second link doesn't work, then try

http://www.freewebs.com/simplyme13/poems...

for my (middle-school sounding) poems and

http://www.freewebs.com/simplyme13/stori...

for my (not-as-middle-school-sounding... story. Or part of it at least. Hopefully I'll get lots done and actually get somewhere with it. But I can't decide which route to take it. Friendship - finding the dark side in everyone or friendship - after surviving a horror-esque hike. Whatever way it goes, it goes.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I would like to read some of your stuff, but when I clicked on the poetry button there was nothing there. Maybe you should recheck it again. Post again when you get it fixed and I will happy to read your stuff.