Question:
Ehh is this any good at all?
i was bored and i just thought i'd write something so.. yeah... it's about the ocean. is this any good at all? it's quite random..
My footsteps echoed across the dock as I walked closer to the end. I seated myself and gazed over the ocean presented before me. The currents and waves looked painted, and from a pallet of a rainbow of blues, so many shades. The moonlight spread across the rush of the water seemed unreal as it shown so greatly in contrast to the dark sky. The omnipresent feel of contentment submerged me. My eyes began wandering past the actual view, and before I knew it, I was swept away by the sound and feel of the sea. My heart seemed to be beating in sync with the currents and flows of the ocean. I found myself tilted forward towards the blue, as the call and pull of it was so strong. The want to just drift away with the current, as my mind was so clear, was almost overwhelming.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
If yer young, your abilities have promise! If you're as old as a generation then keep tryin! But, be more explorative w/ yer words! Expand them to give t/ reader a "taste" of what you are writing or (if experienced) experiencing.