Question:
What do you think of this poem?
When the darkness closes in and you lose your will to fight;
I am the tiny ray of hope and the speck of silvery light;
That peers through your dark and dingy thoughts to bring you back to life.
When the coldness creeps upon your toes and threatens your waking moments;
I am the stranger passing by with ever thoughtful comments;
That willingly provides the knowing smile to help you on your way.
When the tears fall uncontrollably upon your clammy cheeks;
I am the shadow by your side that need not hear you speak;
That listens only to unspoken words to lift your saddened heart.
When the calmness takes you over and you seek a new direction;
I am your faithful searching arrow the soul of your discretion;
That guides you from the living hell and helps you find your purpose.
When life seems hard to comprehend and all your hope is gone;
I am the child who takes your hand and helps the day be done;
That is your true & special friend your always Guiding Angel.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I got half way through and gave up. I was finding it didn't scan and was akward to read.
....well, you did ask !