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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Who likes my poem?Question: Who likes my poem?http://home.playdo.com/crowngirl123... Additional Details9 months ago 9 months ago Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
..while I did like your opening stanza....the cadence was well 'punctuated' and i felt the emotion. I think using names changes the tempo of your piece in a way that distances the reader from connecting to your experience. instead of using personal names you perhaps could have written; |