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Poem, your thoughts...?

Lucid...

Lost in the vexed mind
Cannot tell what is real or fiction
Worry and fret
Chaos ensues
Trouble comes to drowned
Quickly tribulations begin to choke life

Fight and arise to sanity
Shove away the negative thoughts
Climb out of the disorder
Seek the light

Take a breath of clean air
The battle is over
Who has won?

Who wrote this... do youlike it and what are your thoughts about it?


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I don't know who wrote it but I like it. I think it might give hope to a depressed reader.