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What do you think of my poem?

I saw Jesus in the horrorr film,
I never saw his face.
But his dark soul was hidden,
Inside the body of a puppett.

I saw a christian in the horrorr film,
There was no end to his faith.
He'd give his life for Jesus,
And he'd give other's lives too.

I saw you in the horrorr film,
It was you who was the killer.
You were not a villain but a victim,
Of the puppett, the one you call God.

I saw satan in the horrorr film,
I never saw his face.
But his dark soul was hidden,
Inside the body of a puppett.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I love it. It says many of the things I feel.

There is a saying that goes something like, "Jesus, save me from your followers."

Keep up the good work.

Peace

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