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Tell me how this poem is that i just got done with, thank you!?

Confusion

Darkness encloses me
In a field of white fog
With wall as tall as mountains
To keep me inside my own labyrinth
Confusion and fear guide me
Into dead ends and dark allies
And I turn once again into the depths of my confusion
I then turn around and run towards a light
Where I find a big bronze gate
But alas I have no key and I fall to my knees and weep
For the ones that I live stand on the other side
And they point for me to go back into the darkness
The labyrinth consumes me and the gate disappears
And once again the darkness encloses me
In a field of white fog
With walls as tall as mountains
To keep me inside this prison
Confusion and fear guide me
Into dead ands and dark allies
And I turn again and again
In the depths of my own confusion


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Not bad, stayed on track with the perception of the poem. Good job!