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What do you think of this poem for a teenager ?

A dark cloud hanging
Just hanging
With no light to see
Without light
Without hope
A future not seen

A fight to grow
To see what you can??t see
Emptiness all around
Empty pain
Empty suffering
In a youth so green

A readiness is needed
To learn and be who you can be
Freedom you seek
Free soul
Free mind
The life intended for teen

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8 months ago
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Love & Blessings
Milly

8 months ago
The last line is
The life intended for a teen
Sorry a typo error


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Sounds pretty good. Everything a teenager is going through and thinking. I mean yea, it sounds pretty dark but its pretty much how most teens feel at a certain point in their life. To be "free" is what all teens feel will be their release from whatever is bothering or holding them back. Sara.