Tell me what do you think about this poem (pt.2)?

Question:

Tell me what do you think about this poem (pt.2)?

This is the second poem that should have been with my first question but it would't fit.... I made this last night because I couldn't sleep and I needed to do something to get me tired.

"I Love You"

When she smiles,I melt inside.
She is the one I shall never
Set aside.

She is the one I think of
Whenever I am down.
She is the one that will
Never make me frown.

She is the one that completes me.
The one and only that makes me whole.
She is especially the one that
Keeps all the good stored
In my soul.

She is a dream that
At last has come true.
What more can I say to someone
Beautiful like you?
The last thing I would do
Is say " I LOVE YOU"

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

that is a very nice poem. I think any girl that would receive it would be very flattered. good work