Tell me what you think about this poem. Pt.1?

Question:

Tell me what you think about this poem. Pt.1?

This was a poem I made up last year in 8th grade. (It would've been 2 poems in one question but the second one wouldn't fit...)

"These Feelings"

I have these feelings
These feelings in my heart.
Whenever I see you,
I feel as if I've been struck
By a dart.

It is these feelings I cannot deny
Yet,they make me want to try.
But for a guy like me,
Who knows how things would
Turn out to be?

I'm willing to take risks
To give you gifts and to win your heart.
I just wish that one day,We'll be
Together and hope that nothing
Tears us apart.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Not many guys can write a poem like this one. You will probably be a heartbreaker when your a junior or senior. It shows a touch of romanticism. Your Good