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DO YOU LiKE THIS POEM??

You dont know how deep someone can peer into your soul
How much someone can take form you leaving you with nothing
I`m completely dead on the inside
Although on the outside it may seem like im alive, functioning perfectly
But on the inside I`m completely emotionally numb
Having lost the ability to feel
any way or any type of emotion
I feel nothing.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's a pretty good poem. If you want more feedback on your poetry you should go to YourPoetryDotCom. It's free to join and you will get honest and encouraging critiques form other poets.
It's also a more appropriate place to post your poetry than here.