Would anyone like to read my short story and tell me what you think? It is not c

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Would anyone like to read my short story and tell me what you think? It is not completed, so keep that in mind

http://blog.360.yahoo.com/blog-kffxq8k3e...

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Did you really write that?? Because it's very good writing. I'm not sure of the market for a zombie-Auswich story, but you seem to have put a lot of passion into it. If you could "flesh it out" (stupid pun) and make it real by eliminating the zombie thing, you'd get a wider audience. I think you're a natural writer.