What do you think of my poem?

Question:

What do you think of my poem?

He searched for a victim of his vermin,
He swam across the seas.
And there he'd rest,
until death let,
The victim of him free.

The men who fought this monster,
Will fight but shan't succeeed.
For the creature from hell,
Will find them as well,
And they themselves shall bleed.

But you shan't know this evil beast,
Till he is inside you.
And there he'll grow,
And then you'll know,
My tragedy is true.

For this poem and for many lives,
This is the final stanza.
The monster came,
Revealed his name,
The monster's name was cancer.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Pretty good one.. you described cancer as a monster wich is true, I hope Medicine will find a cure for it and very soon..so people won't die of it anymore..
:)