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Would this make a good song or poem?

Kindness in his eyes, so don??t think twice
Kindness in his eyes, so don??t think twice
Just tell him why Just tell him why
The magic lingers when he walks in the room
As he lifts you up to the sky
Just tell him there??s no reason why
So natural more than coincidental

If it??s not love, then it??s black magic
Don??t you think so? Don??t you think so?
Just ask him just ask him just ask him
If it??s not love, then it must be more than
The weight of two heart??s gravity
Magnetism maybe but it??s black magic to me

Blindness in your mind, you look only with your eyes
Blindness leads you to the dark
Beneath grey late summer skies
When the night comes early
And the coming rains look stark
Just ask him why Just ask him why
When he lifts you up in his arms, ask him why

If it??s not love, then what must it be
Seems like black magic to me
Dancing around the circle
If it??s not love, then it must be
Black magic black magic to me

Looks are more than a language
More than intimacy
The soul lingers more than pointed fingers
More than just a dead old fantasy
Sounds like black magic to me

More than love more than love
Brings the two of you together
Maybe destiny maybe

If it??s not love, black magic brings you together


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's already a good poem!