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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > My attempt at a 'quite' light poem. Please read and comment.?Question: My attempt at a 'quite' light poem. Please read and comment.?a lovely night, 7 months ago 7 months ago Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
hi, replace the line "very dim light" (l.4) with a different expression, plus in line 11 you probably made a spelling mistake, were you gonna say "simple" instead of "somple", or "sample" - well i doubt that makes sense ;) in general your poem isn't too bad... |