Check out my poem and tell me how it is!!!!?

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Check out my poem and tell me how it is!!!!?

Mixed emotions unsure feelings
yea u told me u loved me
but did it come from the heart
you can tell me ne thing
but do u mean it
i must admit it was good while it lasted
but every good thing must come to an end
now we must depart and go our seperate ways
gotta find something better or someone who loves me for me
6 mos 2 weeks 4 days (damn u still here)
time went by and u still got a hold on me
i have to learn to let go or better yet let you go
why settle for less when i deserve so much more
waste of time, a broken heart w/teary eyes, and a no good *****
thats what u were, thats what u did, and thats what u are!!

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

There's obviously intense feeling in this poem, but you use a lot of cliches. Could you think of more original ways to express your feelings -- maybe describe some of the good things, and how they went wrong? I know many people will relate to what you've written.