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Creative Lines for poetry?

I write dark,sad poetry all the time and I can't come up with a brand new line for my poem that is different so it doesn't sound like i'm useing it all the time. I usually use stuff like...

* My heart is drowning in the ocean of my tears
*The darkness is wrapping onto my soul
*I'm the corpse walking in life
* I am stuck in the shadows of darkness

ECT. Please help me out.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Ebon eve enshrouds my soul....

Depression's depths surround me.........

Writhing madly in despair's iron grip........

Gazing at joy as through iron bars........

None heed, none respond, none care.....

Hot tears flow as I struggle to shed the weight of life.......

If one prayer is to be answered let it be this:...........