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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Please take a look at my poem..and let me know what you think.?Question: Please take a look at my poem..and let me know what you think.?Hey everyone---thank you for taking the time to read this... Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Are you looking for an opinion on the poem or on your emotions? Because if you truly want opinions on the poem itself, you cant really expect only the positive comments. I liked the poem at 'look , I wanted to be loved right' everything after that was fairly good. Before that line, some sentences were good but had a couple of unneeded/unnecessary words in them. Others seemed only like blubbering rants. Potentially a good poem rewritten and edited a bit. |