Question:
Tell me what you think of this ...?
This is something i wrote , honestly.
i've had other people tell me its great. But i still dont know yet.
As I walk with you in the night, the only thing that is taken is your life. Now I sit here, just thinking, thinking of why they took you and not me. My world isn??t complete without you, and I can??t make it on my own. I see you every now and then. Sometimes it seems as though you are really there. All I dream is when you will come to take me with you. When I do see you I can??t bare to look you in the eyes, for it is impossible because you are DEAD! One thing you could do is to wake me up from this nightmare. Every midnight I stare up in the sky to see a sign that you are there. The tears and sadness is trying to break me down but I won??t let because just the thought of you keeps me alive. As the rain falls I listen carefully so maybe I can hear your voice once more before I meet you again. But I do realize that I will see you soon someday soon.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I must say it is well written even if I needed to read the first sentence some more times.
Then English is not my language.
And it is going to my heart too...
I know the feeling and it is about a living person...
I hope for you it is not something real...
If so, we are kindred spirits, Abercrombie...