What do u all think about this? I just recently made it.?

Question:

What do u all think about this? I just recently made it.?

Rejection

At first,I thought she was the one.
The one destined for me.
Now,I feel bummed out.
Because we weren't meant to be.

They say. "Third Time's A Charm."
But for me,I guess I just suck.
I tried my best to win her heart.
In the end,I didn't have much luck.

I respect her decision.
It was her choice to make.
I don't know if I'll ever find someone new.
Only time will tell,and for that I will wait.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

what did you make? kinda boring you should add something like, oh and I beat her *** and then made her love me or something