How is this poem? I got in an argument about it.?

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How is this poem? I got in an argument about it.?

She was a metaphor
a thought
carefully crafted
in the minds of the willing.
In my life
I saught after her
paid a price far too extravagant to mention
and yet she still evades me.
She was a hope
a giggle released from the lips
of a sleeping child
during the storms of life
and so I wait for her
Imagine her
consecrate my flesh for her
until she is attained

She is love.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

...except that "saught" should be "sought", it is by far one of the better poems (or what others here have tried to pass off as "poems") i have read not only here, but on a poetry site that I visit regularly...excellent flow and form, a complete expression of poetic thought...what was the argument about? If it was over the lack of rhyme and/or classic meter, tell them to bugger off! This is very good work.