Post your original beautiful poetry work here. How do you like my poem?

Question:

Post your original beautiful poetry work here. How do you like my poem?

I figure everyone needs to vent through poetry every once and a while. how about we start a poem q&a... ill start.

tell me what you think:

my selfishness cannot cool the sun,
my selfishness starts wars,
my selfishness cannot be proven, but i will argue on its behalf to the death
my selfishness is part of who i am, i was born into it
my selfishness is no different then yours, for we are both neither right nor wrong
my selfishness may make me smile, but i am only tree among a forest
I understand now, my religion

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Interesting but needs some thought