Question:
A Poem I Wrote?
It's about a friend who is depressed because his friend committed suicide and he feels he could have done more t help him emotionally. I haven't came up with a name for it.
He stares out the window
watching life just pass him by.
His pain aint going to stop though
all he ever does is cry.
Looking back on halcyon days
he never ever forgets.
It seems its raining all the time
and he's drowning in regrets.
All he wants is inner peace
some people to understand.
That his torment might not ever cease
its more than he can stand.
The moral of the story is
always read between the lines.
Some people dont share their burdens
So pay attention for the signs.
Additional Details6 months ago
Forgot to mention, this is like the first poem I have ever written so please dont be hard on me if it sucks :)
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That was so deep. I can't believe that is the first poem you have written. On a scale from 1-10 10 being the highest I would give you a 10.