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What do you think of this poem?

Life's Inconsistencies

Happiness always lasts temporarily

and it's consistency is controlled arbitrarily

All hopes and dreams are glass waiting to be shattered

after they are your body and mind are left tattered

Happiness is inconsistent

but the sorrows in life are ever persitent

It's better to grow up and face the strife

then to be naive and think there's true happiness in life

Everyone should accept honesty

rather then ending up living in misery

People don't understand this philosophy

they would if they knew my life story

Happiness makes everything bright

but once it fades you wonder who turned out the light?

After you crash in the dark from the heights of happiness

that's when you'll realize your foolishness

You will see that I was right

then you will learn to stay out of the light.

I don't write good poems I know but I want to know just how bad it is so I can decide who can see it or if it should be burned.

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6 months ago
Don't Be overly critical, be honest not abusive


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

poems came from individual feeling
anywhere it comes ..from spiritual feeling..or movement feeling
the point of a poems is ....
there's no rules that this is good or this 1 is not good....

most important of poems that the writer can freely put words on a paper and feels what's on mind ...

if you can freely put words and mind in a pieces paper
then it makes good poems ...it'll sound nice n worthy

good luck....