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Is this a decent poem?

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By ??The Unnoticed Poet??

To choose between friendship and love...
These thoughts are unbearable
The need to act upon them
For the pointless need to be loved
The need to know if they feel the same
The fear of losing a dear friend in the process
To choose between friendship and love...
The answer is clear
Love will come again
But a good friend comes once in a lifetime
So maybe, a day will come
When the need for a friend and love
Will both be filled
Life will be perfect...


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

That's terrific! Poetry was one of my best topics while taking English courses in university, and it takes a unique kind of mind to be able to take the language in such a way that goes against common English structure while bending it in such a way that artistically still makes sense while providing readers with some kind of meaning, rhyme, or flow to it:

Flowing freely
Endlessly endowed in suspense of drifting nature
Floating above the clouds, ever so peacfully
Rising to the dew, the crisp fluttery of butterflies about
Winging to the emarald glow of the stars in the sky
Enduring to the warmth of the sun in the pond of ever enduing brightness
Flying, meandering, scarcely beholding secrets of the of the past they come
etc...

Good work!