What do you think?

Question:

What do you think?

I don't care whether or not you like this kinda thing....that's not my question....as far as sappy poems/love songs go....whether you like it or not...how does this one fare? If you like this kind of thing, do you like it? It's called "Make Me Blieve" and I wrote it last weak at work when I was really bored....And believe me....I've done much much better in times past, even been published........go to my 360 page to see it....

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6 months ago
And give me your thoughts on why you didn't like it....be honest but make sense....and no answers that are " I just don't like it" types.....I need more then that

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You came up a little short.