Is this poem nay good, it took me like 5 minutes so i dont know if it is or not?

Question:

Is this poem nay good, it took me like 5 minutes so i dont know if it is or not?

Division Of Heart

My world, a turmoil of thoughts and emotion,
Your world, an endless stream of stress and commotion,
My world, a bellowing feeling of hate and regret,
Your world, wondering if you'll ever forget,
My world, hoping for a chance at reconstruction,
Your world, so damn tired of this destruction,
My world, sick as a dog, gettin fat as a hog,
Your world, eyes heavy, no sleep, never ready,
My world, hoping shes growing, and maturing,
Your world, pain of the growing never slowing,
Our world, oppritunities closing,
Our world still exists but never showing,
Our world, an amazing abyss of tireless happiness,
Only waiting to be unlocked once again.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

this poem was nice, sad, a real thinker, truth keep writing poems. if you can right that in five min's. imagine what you can right in a life time :)