Question Home

Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > What do you think about my poem about a girl named Casey? Part 2!!?


Question:

What do you think about my poem about a girl named Casey? Part 2!!?

Here's the continuation to my poem!

Keeping the secret
so that nobody knows.
The evil that posses her
grows and grows.
She wondered how long
she would still have the curse.
Afraid that she would do something
even much worse.
Her heart empty of happiness
and her anger filled her soul.
She wondered if she would
again be whole.
Victims bodies were soon found
covered with mud and dirt.
Family and friends
were deeply hurt.
The pain she kept causing
was making more stress.
She decided to end her life
and put herself to rest.
She made her own grave
and on her tombstone was a note.
These were her last words ever said
and this is what she wrote:
" I love and will miss you all, I hope you will forgive me.
I'm now myself again, but you haven't seen the last of me..."


That's my poem about a girl named Casey! By the way, when I kept saying "she" and "her", I was metioning Casey, not the star. I hope to have more poems soon. Thank you for reading and comment plz! ^.^


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

very good!!!!!!!!