Can someone read my poem and tell me if it's good?

Question:

Can someone read my poem and tell me if it's good?

Every single day,
My heart fades away,
Pain crushing my soul,
Falling into the rabbit hole,
Can someone help me,
How about you,
Were in the same problem,
But we can pull through.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

This is very cliche.

Cliches are far from good, like this poem. Everyone experiences pain and sorrow, and from all of the poems I've read only a few poets manage to communicate the emotions effectively, all others simply follow the same formula.

If you want your writing to be good, put more of YOU into it and less of the cliches.