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What do you think of my poem?

Tear drops falling,
hit the ground.
Gathered thoughts,
yet still unwound.

Soak my soul,
in dignity.
Look around,
alone,
just me.

find the key,
unlock the door,
to hiddden feelings,
never more.

Growing up,
yet falling down.
deep emotions in which i drown.

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6 months ago
thanks guys, i hoped u would like it


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

WOW that is a really good peom. If its true what you wrote and that you feel like that. I feel like that right now too. I want to overcome it cause its affecting the way I treat other people.