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Can you tell me how this peom sounds?????

ok here it is

The Perfect guy

My love streches as far as the sea
If you notice thats longer than me
My love is for one and one person only
Who I will love more than my mom's macaroni
I will share my first hug and my first kiss
I pray the night before,I hope I don't miss anything
It maybe the outside that everyone looks for
But it is the inside that i look for
Day after day i dream of him
minutes after minutes I long for him
Still i must focus which i will do
For deep down inside he long for me too.

how do you like it


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

OMG!!! i absolutly luv it!!! <3. keep up the good work!