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Poem feedback???

I was thinking about submitting it somewhere... its not my favorite, but everyone i've asked really liked it (but they could just be trying to be nice!) and they said it was the best of my poems... but then again they are also feircly against symbolism!!!!!!!!!!! *aah!*
Its on www.xanga.com/curlyq3345 in the first entry on the page and there's another one 2 entries or so down... if you are feeling adventurous and want to read it too??
I hope you like it?? Idk keep in mind im only (almost) 14.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I do think your poem "Wait for me..." is your best, out of the three things I found on that page. The other two sound very typical. Teenage angst in straight-forward uncreative form (not to sound harsh). However, looking over your stuff I decided I like your insightfulness. Keep writing because I know you will be great!!!!