Please read this and tell me what you think?

Question:

Please read this and tell me what you think?

I wrote this today:

Its different
Not a huge change
To the rest of
The world
But to me its
Huge

I cant sleep or
Stay awake
I cant look or look away
I cant cry but I cant
Smile

You??ve moved
somewhere new
To someone else
You tell me
??Nothing
has
changed!??
but it has

I still see you
You look the same
Happier even
But I??m not

I want to fall asleep
Never wake up
I want to run as fast as I can
Jump
Into a dream
Somewhere were no one exists
Stay there
Fly there
Forever

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5 months ago
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I really liked what you wrote and the way you wrote it. Anyone would understand if they had been jilted by someone just when they thought the relationship was going along just fine. He says, "Nothing has changed." Ha! Everything would be changed with him out of the picture. It would hurt so bad you would want to climb into a dream for awhile and not even think about it. Love Hurts----