Question:
Is this going to be a good lyrics for a song?
i was so confident
until i saw you
i was living a normal life
until i came to know you
suddenly am not that sure
and the world i used to live in
is not that secure
i'm cold under the sun light
i'm in war yet no one to fight
i run and run and no where to hide
cause everything is going in my mind
confused ,scared
you shaked my ground
i can not step forward
cause everything is swirling around
even here i'm drowning
and i can't see a saving hand
i'm cold under the sun light
i'm in war yet no one to fight
i run and run and no where to hide
cause everything is going in my mind
im questing for answers
but the no where is hard to find
so eager to see the light
but what if am blind!
am afraid that I've fallen
and i will never stand
i'm cold under the sun light
i'm in war yet no one to fight
i run and run and no where to hide
cause everything is going in my mind
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Bravo!
this is so beautiful i can't wait to see it as a song, insightful words.
this is really amazing lyrics, adorable.
i can't believe that i have read words so wonderful.
this is really going to be one big hit.
"i'm cold under the sun light
i'm in war yet no one to fight
i run and run and no where to hide
cause everything is going in my mind"
i loved how you repeated these lines and also i loved these lines, these are more than lines.
please, if you compose it do send me a copy.
I am waiting.