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What do you think of this prose?

This Hunger

These indifferent eyes throw shades onto
the amiability that sees through
dishonor.
To the fact so systematic,
its bite boldly feeds the hand.
This hunger hides, in an earth so generous,
yet patiently tired of the desperation.
Desperate in the soul, they look like they have
not been taken care of.
Give them, in return, affection.
Have the audacity.
Blessed only by his own class,
he feeds on the best food and throws the rest to swine.
This hunger?


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

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Work!
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