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Broken-what do you think?

A dull Serrated blade-the best friend shes found.
She drags it across the scars left by her love.
Another heart break, another scar.
Another wound, another tear.

Known as indestructible amongst those she calls friends,
She hides her bitter pain, her hatred, and her love.
Left alone, she reveals her true heart.
A dead girl within a broken home.

Tears blend with blood as her skin is sliced.
Crimson tears left on the pleasant white tile floor.
A dead girl lying close by with a bleeding heart.
Another broken home, kills another beautiful soul.

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5 months ago
yeah, i wrote it a few months ago. realised its one of my poems i havent reecieved many oppinions on, and i still like it, so i thought id post it on here.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

happy. verrry happy. I'd say it's "cutting" edge. Bloody good.