Question:
What do you think of my new poem?
You are on the back of a giant eagle
arms outstretched
legs firmly locked so as not to fall
He dives
Your heart is pounding in your ear
And the only thing on your mind
Is the sound of the wind rushing past your face
You know this and this alone
that it somehow comforts you
to know that when you fall
there is something to slow you
to keep you company
and if you have a parachute, guide you safely to the ground
back to where you started in the first place
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
ummm, keep workin on it.