What do you thinkof this poem?

Question:

What do you thinkof this poem?

I'm a creative writer at heart. This is one of my most recent poems. Please give your honest opinion and please don't steal this.

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One last kiss on Saturday night
Memories come racing back
Happiness, sadness
Love, pain

Longing to stay here forever
He slowly pulls away
Looking deep into his eyes
Only one last time

He says "I love you" for the first time
A tear rools down your face
Reply with the same answer before he leaves
Watch him get into the car and slowly pulls away

Down on your knee
Begging for a miracle
Flashes of images in your mind
Open your eyes and pray you'll see him again.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i love your poem. hoping for a book of poetry from you some day.
your fan,
Ana