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What do you think of this poem?

I wrote this after my best friend moved away. The title is the initials of me and my three friends.

BCKH

We were four once.
Four sturdy legs on the table.
Four swift limbs on the leopard
Four quarters of a whole.

But then you left,
And now we are three.

Is a table with three legs as sturdy?
Is a leopard with three limbs as swift?
Is three quarters still a whole?

That table may still stand.
That leopard may still run.
You may have something left.

But without you,
How long until the table falls?
How long until the leopard tires?
Is what is left enough?

We will endure.
But without you,
Nothing is the same.

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5 months ago
Not all poems rhyme! It's called Free Verse


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

this poem was amazing. it's really sweet and meaningful. you should keep at it i give it a 10/10