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What do you think of my poem?

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I'm standing here
In the dark
Not thinking at all
Being haunted by my inner thoughts
And all my brain is processing, is you
How you hurt me, how you destroyed me
How you murdered my soul
How can you just walk away from that
Like it never happened
How can you still try to be my friend
Do you think I can just sit and pretend it never happened
You left me here
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

omg this is great. it has deep meaning and is just amazing. i think you should enter it in a contest you would have a good chance of winning. i look forward to more of your poems.