Question:
I have no clue how to end this?
i'm wirting a pome for creative writing and i'm stuck, i have no clue how to end it.
HELP ME PLEASE!!! check my grammar too please!
Every time I sit in silence
I wonder about the path that I will take
And the friends that have made
Which ones are true and which ones are phony
Life has too many options
Too many roads to choose from
People pulling me this way and that
Trying to make decisions for me
How is a person supposed to choose?
When they??re told that not going too fail
Friends pulling me one-way
And parents another
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
dancing d,
First off, extra points for spelling "grammar" correctly!
I like your poem, I think it expresses an all too real dilemma of adolescence.
As for the picky grammar things:
..."the friends that I have made" (not "that have made")
..."not going to fail" (not "not going too fail")
As for how to end it:
How about a stanza saying how all this leaves you feeling, emotionally?
You could reference the opening stanza by pointing out that your emotions are not as silent at your surroundings...
You could say what it is you'd truly like to hear breaking the silence...
You could talk about the possibility of your taking one road or the other and how that makes you feel...
You could explore the irony of the fact that they all say they want you to "choose" but, in reality, friends and family want to choose for you...
I just throw these out to spark your brain because the best stuff you write comes from you and you alone.
Keep writing, you've got something to say!