I had a go at creating a short poem...?

Question:

I had a go at creating a short poem...?

My hand is reaching,
Your eyes are closed.
The art of teaching,
His face so posed??
It will change you soon.

Your skin so soft,
His face is old?
The ageing loft,
Memories un-told??
Are where your secrets lie.

I had nothing to do, and was inspired lol...please no nasty comments - best answer will be picked if I recieve reasonable replies =)

Additional Details

4 months ago
I'm changing the word ageing to "darkening"...im sorry it doesnt make much sense but it really does to what im thinking of - thanks for the comments guys!

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I to do a bit of writting and what u hav said tells a story of sadness yet full of hope its sad that a hand is reaching but the eyes are closed . U find that in alot of people every 1 searching with there eyes closed . memories untold stay that way untill u find the 1 u been looking 4