Is this a good poem?

Question:

Is this a good poem?

my teacher told us to right a poem dipicting the most stong and over welming emotion thats we ever edured. i chose pain, tell me if this is at least a passing grade to turn in.i cant turn in anything below a c+ if i wanna get to 7th grade.

i've been torn down for so long
tought that all my answers are wrong
striving to find solid ground
people steady tearing me down
tried my hardest, but it didnt matter
under pressure from pain
watch me scatter
my head head held low
figured hell is the only place for me to go
pain is what had me for so long
thats the only reason i'm not strong

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Omgsh, thats amazing! I couldn't have wrote i better myself, but the thing is would you teacher get mad if you said the word hell? Other than that its freaking amazing!