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What do you think of my poem?

Where has my sister gone?
We used to have such fun.

Locked away inside her mind,
Crazed words fly from her mouth
With the intent to injure,
Always hitting their mark.

Where has my sister gone?
Now I??m all alone.

All the fun we used to have,
A thing of the distant past.
Now we??re archenemies,
Living in the same house.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Its good, sounds like you are missing your sister to me, sisters can do this stuff when growing up, It should change again when you get older, but why not let her read it?
She may need someone to talk to! that might be you!
Hope it gets better good luck