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Are these poems good?

Destiny
u mean da world 2 me
i lov u so much
u changed my life with a touch
and ur the only 1 I want
i sleep cing ur face in a haunt
one day i tell u how i feel
den u tell me da luv i hav iznt real
but i hav 2 understand wat ur going through
and all the things u hav 2 do
i tryed jus not to care
but jus thinkin,it seems lik ur there
i miss u all da time
everyday wishin u where mine
its jus hard to let u go
when i already kno
dat its true
i really luv u

Additional Details

4 months ago
was it wrong for me to tell u dat i luv u
but u jus dont kno wat im goin through
it hurts knowing ill do n e thing 4 u
but watever i do
will probably jus b meaningless to u
i jus dont get love n e more
i thought u were da 1 i was goin 2 luv and adore
i did but now all dat is gone
but 4 sum reason i cant move on

4 months ago
u told me i was 2 young
to really see love
how u goin 2 tell me dat
when true luv fell from above
u told me i jus like u
but thats not true
theres so many things ill do 4 u
there are no words that express how i feel
i jus no its real
u want to stay friends i do 2
but before i end this i want 2 say
i still luv u

4 months ago
its hard for me to deny that i luv u when i do
i want a relationship to happen but its all up to u
your the one i wouldnt want to lose
theres so many people in dis world i hope im the one u choose
ur beautiful but with a good heart to,dat had to be sent from above
a special person lik you deserve more luv
im prayin sum day will be together
but r friendship is enough hopin it will last forever


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

it's ok but proper grammar is important in poetry. fix the spelling, capitalize stuff, use proper punctuation and then rework it a little it. it could be really good.
peace