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Can you please help me write this poem? I need to add 1 metaphor, 1 simile, and imagery. Thanks :)?

sunshine365
it rains a quarter of an inch
and it??s the storm of the decade.
it dips below sixty-five
and we dawn our cold-weather blockade.

in california, that sun-soaked state,
it??s impossible to see when a season starts and another begins.
whether/weather on the first day of summer
or the thousandth snowless winter and counting,
the curse of that gaseous daylight star
the sun—continues to pound from above.
and the fahrenheit ceases to amaze
where it??s always a ??pleasant?? degree.
but this sameness isn??t pleasant, not for me.

what??s the use of meteorology
when you know change will never come?
who would want to live in a place of predictability,
where the slightest drizzle is cause for disarray?
this e n d l e s s season is like.
it??s always sunny. it??s sunny again.
how boring it is, never any variety in the temperature,
nor sunlight, nor texture.
but to deal with this monotony is no feat.
just go with the flow of the sunlight rays as they
strike—week after e n d l e s s week.


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