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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > I need to know what you guys think of this poem?Question: I need to know what you guys think of this poem?Some of you may have seen it being posted for one of my answers but this was actually to be used for like a tribute to my class about what I learned and stuff so here goes...(Please tell me truthfully what you think and I wanna extend it so would appreciate if you guys could give me some ideas.) Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think you could have had a more solid start. your punctuation (unless you chose not to have any) could not only be correct but apparent. Though I understand the end, I think that could have more too. |