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Question: Your opinion on my thesis for Toni Morrison!?
ok so im doing a research paper on 'Toni Morrison' for my english 3 class in high school!. Today we had to come up with a good thesis and i was wondering if you could take the time to look over the one that i came up with!. here it is:
"Toni Morrison congests her stories from personal experiences of The Great Depression concerning the agitation and turmoil of living in a biased society and the desire for one to live contented!."

if you can help that would be great i very much appreciate your feedback im trying to do really good on this!. Thank you,

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
"Congests her stories!?"

I am not sure what you are trying to say, but "congests" is the wrong, wrong word!. Constructs!? Contrives!? Creates!?

Toni Morrison draws on personal experience during the Great Depression to create stories that tell of life in a biased society and one's desire to live a contented life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com