Is there a better way to put the following sentence!? Specifically the part in quotes!.
A since of dread immediately washed over her and "without being aware of it she reached out for the support of the kitchen table!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
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A since of dread immediately washed over her and "without being aware of it she reached out for the support of the kitchen table!."Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Have "and instinctively reached out for the support of the table"Www@QuestionHome@Com A since of dread immediately washed over her and "without being aware of it she reached out for the support of the kitchen table!." firstly a sense of dread, not since!. Other than that it sounds good, you don't have to re-write it, but if you did i'd say: "she instinctively reached out for the support of the kitchen table!." "without being aware of it" sounds maybe a little too long, and like something is controlling her movements (and if it's meant to be that something is controlling her then just ignore this)Www@QuestionHome@Com She suddenly became conscious of a feeling of despair creeping into her , like condensation on a chilled glass of lemonade in the summer, running down the side of it, seemingly neverending!. She reached out for the kitchen table, it being the only thing between her and a trip to the hospital!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well change "since" to "sense" Maybe: A sense of dread immediately washed over her, "obliviously she reached out for the support of the kitchen table!." or A sense of dread immediately washed over her, "blindly she reached out for the support of the kitchen table!." Hope that helps!Www@QuestionHome@Com It was immediate, her face drained of all human color and a sense of dread flooded in and without being aware of it she reached out for the support of the kitchen table!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Sounds good but I think two shorter, crisper sentences will work/sound better!. She was immediately overcome with a deep (and weakening) sense of dread!. Unconsciously, she grabbed the kitchen table for support!."Www@QuestionHome@Com A sense of dread immediately washed over her!. Without being completely aware of it she reached out for the additional support of the kitchen table!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A sense of dread immediately overcame her and unaware of her actions, she reached for support from the kitchen table!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I think that you meant to use the word *sense and not *since!. If you can give some more information about this, like what or whom you are quoting, then I could try to help!.Www@QuestionHome@Com She suddenly felt a sharp pain of dread invade into her body, and she instinctively reached out to the kitchen table to support her balance!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A since of dread immediately washed over her and "without having any awareness of it she reached out to grab the kitchen table for support!."Www@QuestionHome@Com You could try this!.!.!.!.!.!. A sense of dread immediately washed over her and unaware of her weakness she reached out for support from the kitchen table!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A since of dread immediately washed over her, unconsciously she reached for the support!. The kitchen table reached her grasp!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A sense of dread immediately washed over her!. Without being aware of it, she reached out for the kitchen table for support!. (No quotes needed for this)Www@QuestionHome@Com The kitchen table garnered a new use as the dread flooded through her, it stopped being a surface and became a crutch!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You should first realize the difference between since and sense; it drastically improves the sentence quality!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A sense of dread washed over her!. Without realising it she reached out and grabbed the edge of the kitchen table for support!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Without thinking her hands reached out for the support of the kitchen table as her knees buckled to dreadful sense that washed over her!. LOL Did it backwards!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A "sense" of dread immediately washed over her!. Not "since"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com "she reluctantly reached out for the closet support which happened to be support of the kitchen table"Www@QuestionHome@Com like this!.!.!. A sense (not since) of dread immediately washed over her and without being aware of it, she reached out for the support of the kitchen table!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A pit of dread formed in her stomach!. Unconsciously, she reached out to grab the kitchen table!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A sense of dread immediately washed over her, and "quote"(citation)!. cant forget to cite it, yoWww@QuestionHome@Com UNCONSCIOUSLY SHE REACHED OUT FOR THE SUPPORT OF THE KITCCHEN TABLEWww@QuestionHome@Com Unknowingly, she reached for the kitchen table as a sense of dread washed over her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i love pie !!!! :DWww@QuestionHome@Com |